The initial velocities of the different dots definitely should’ve been randomized so they weren’t all the same direction. Lauren’s point that the piece lacks of strong focal point is accurate. Perhaps it would be slightly nicer to look at had I chosen a nicer color (maybe just a nice white), but also have slightly different colors per hour would also help. Having the piece be slightly more intuitive to it representing the hours left in the day is important, though I really like how it breaks down the hours used up so far.