So I got from my feedback that though some people found the concept of the work to be intriguing, most were disappointed by the visual representation of my concept. I see that it needs visual development that connects to the concept in a stronger manner. I have never thought about citing my artwork before (because of the information being provided, I mean I’ve cited sources of inspiration before but never hard data.) I suppose it is because I’ve never really done data visualization before. I understand that in the future, I should avoid using a default font. I can’t wait to make more computational projects with an underlying concept in the future. Woo! So happy to hear that nobody seemed to have a problem with actually reading the time!!!